Thursday, October 30, 2014

Cloud 9 01


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Cloud 9 chapter 1

(A/N: this story has a lot of characters. So please focus.) 
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Would you believe me when I tell you that I'm the happiest, yet the saddest? 
Would you believe me when I tell you that I want you, and I don't at they same time? 
It's just too complacted. 

Oh hi it's me Shaden the 20 years-old girl who completes her bachelors in Los Angeles. I live in a very small flat with 2 bedrooms 2 bathrooms, living room, and a very small kitchen. My flat views the city of Los Angeles. 

Back when I was 18 years old and I just came to Los Angeles: 
It's my first day in college and I'm so excited. I woke up early that day, took a very warm relaxing shower. After that I wore my jeans and white tanktop with a floral cardigan. I applied a very light make-up wore my glasses and took my novel, my cross bag. Wore my sneakers. After that I rushed to the bus stop, it just arrived, ashwa!! 

Bus: 
Stranger: new in town? 
Me: talking to me? 
Stranger: yeah-.- 
Me: oh yeah I'm new.
Stranger: welcome to LA, I hope you have a great time 
Me: thank you 
She smiled and I smiled back. 


University: 

I was lost. I saw a map and I went to it. Literally mdri ween rbi ga6ni. 

.....: do you need help? 
Americans (: 
Me: no thank you 
And I turned my gaze back to the map 
Stranger: what is your next class? 
Me: what do you want? 
Stranger: help? 
Me: well I think I went to the map because I don't need your help 
Stranger: hmm my name is Turki if you need any help you will find me in the cafeteria.!
He's 3rbi.. 
Before he leaves 
Me: excuse me!! 
Turki: yes ma'am? 
Me: hm can you please tell me where's Mr. Smith Math's hall? 
I gave up. I was too late. 
Turki: follow me young lady 
I followed him 
Turki: so you are new? 
Me: yeah I came last week 
Turki: nice 
Turki: what is this book as he pointed at the novel 
me: oh! It's called before I fall. 
Turki: oh enjoy reading 
Me: thank you? 
Turki: so what is your name? 
Me: shaden 
Turki: 3rbiya? :o 
Me; yeah
Turki: leeh ma glti? 
Me: you didn't ask? 
Turki: well yeah! So mn ween? 
Me: Saudi? 
Turki: ya hala bree7t ahli 
Me; Saudi? 
Turki; ee
Me: mashallah
And we stopped 
Turki: so this is Mr. Smith class. what do you have after him? 
Me: I have 45 minuets break then Mrs. Andy
Turki; Allah y3eeenk 
Me: why? 
Turki: h4rt'ha wajd 
Me: Allah y3een 
Turki; ezibdah e4a 5l9ti mrs. Andy class walk down to the end of the hallway take right then left and it will be the 4th class on your right. 
Me: thank you 
Turki: my pleasure ma'am
I smiled and entered the class. 
It was kind of quiet but I can hear some people whispering, and the other are checking their phones. Shitttt I didn't call my mother. She must be worried. I took my phone and when I was about to call.. 
Mr. Smith came in: good morning class 
Class: good morning 
I sat on the nearest chair! 
Mr. Smith: I'm going to take the attendance
Mr. Smith: Alflani Haifa 
Haifa: here 
Her family name sounds familiar. 
Mr. Smith: alflani shaden 
Me: here
Names 
Names 
And names. 
Mr. Smith: and we are done! So class I will be giving you math 001 for this semester. Please if you have any questions you may ask anytime anywhere. 
Mr. Smith: I give a lot of pop quizzes. So always be aware to have a quiz anytime. 
A moment of silence. 
Mr. Smith: so now we will be taking a pop Quiz 
Amda ya 7mar 
He passed papers. 
First question: 
What is your name? Shaden Sami Alflani 
Second question; 
When is your birthday? 7th of November, 1994.
Third question: 
What is your favorite ice cream flavor? Dark chocolate and coffee 
Fourth question: 
How long have you been living in LA (or America)? Just moved in. 
Fifth question: 
When are you graduating? Hopefully 2016. 

A guy: damn man. 
Mr. Smith: please when you finish bring the paper up here. 
I stood up and I was the first one and gave him the paper. And before I go back to my seat
Mr. Smith: lucky! You had the easiest. 
I giggled 
Mr. Smith; you're dismissed 
Her read my name from the paper 
Mr. Smith: Shaden! Have a great day. 
I was surprised. 
Me: thank you mr. Smith 
And I left the class. 
I went to the cafeteria and immeditly called my mother 

On the phone with my mother: 
Me; halla halla ba7la om 
Mother: hala wallah halla Bely nst omha mn el7mas 
Me: sorry!! Wallah nsait 
Mother: wrak ya kafi ma twreeni wjhk? 
Me: al7in ak7l 3younk e9bri 
I opened the camera (tango) 
Mother: ya zeenk 
Me: aww mama 
Faj2a kl e5wani na6een wraha 
Fahad: ya hallaaaa bl,bzr ely 6art America w 5ltna 
Fahad my brother was 23 years back then. (5 years older) 
Shahad: Ahlaaaaan
Shahad younger sister she was 16 (2 years younger) 
Abdulaziz: hiii shaden 
He was 8 years old back then. (10 years younger) 
Shaden:heeey ya klab eshtgt lkom 
Mother: 9jeetoni w5ru 
Shahad: yumma zay ma hy bntk w tbeen tsolfen m3ha hy e5tna 
shaden: ween shai5a? 
Shahad: naymaa 
Shai5a was 25 back then. 
.....: 97aait
Shaden; wrooni eyaha 
Shai5a: halla bl zaina weenk m5tfya 
Shaden: ams mklmtk ya kalba 
Shai5a; bs etfgna tklmeeni gbl 
Me: nsait nsait 
Shai5a: 6oul 3umrk nasya! 
Fahad: ma 3ndk class al7in? 
Me: ela  bs ma tdroon sh9ar twa!!! 
Fahad; sh9ar 
And I told them what happened (skipping turki's part 6b3n) 
Shai5a: 7'6kkkk 
Fahad: y5rb baaaitk 
Shahad: Allah hbbbb 
Me: Allah ya54kom e4kro rbkom yumma shofehom 
Mother; e4kro rbkom al7in tsg6 e5tkm 
All of them: mashallah 
3ziz: r7ti Disney? 
Me: la ma r7t!! 
Shahad: kln 3la hmh Sarra 
We all laughed at 3ziz! 7beeebi eshtgtlaaa 
3ziz: Ana lma aje 3ndk nroo7 okay? 
Me; inshallaaaah bs ent t3al 
3ziz: mama 3adi nroo7 bukra? 
Mother: ya leet'ha bh,s'holaa
And she started to cry 
Me: mamaaaa! La t9e7een wla b9ee7 wyak 
Shai5a: yumma gltlk ro7i m3ha enti ma sm3ti 
Mother: w e5wank? 
Shai5a: kl wa7d akbr mn ethani! W 3ziz 3adi yjls m3ai Ana ma 3ndi la shu'3l wla msh'3la mt5rja w jalsa 
Me: fr7ana bnfsk?
Shai5a: tra marh wanasah! Ashoof Shahad w Yousef yro7on edwam w Ana twni mnsd7a bnam!  
Shahad: ma y'97kk!!! Allah yrzgk b,zooj 3lah ygwmk mn 4 elfajr yarb 
We all laughed 
Yousef: shfeekom t'97koon? 
Fahad: tst'hbl ant? esa3a km? 
Yousef: ya5i jay mn dwam shrayek y3ni? 
Yousef was 13 back then. 
Fahad: la tnaf5 la afg3 wjhk e7trm o5ok elkbeer 
Yousef: kl zg bs 
Me: la tt'hawshon!!! 
Yousef: oh shadoona sh5bark 
W n6 bn9 el,camera I took a screen shot! 
Me: kwaisa!! 
Mother: yumma shaden wsh af6rti? 
Me; yumma ma b3d twni 6al3a w klmtk 3la 6oul
Mother: Youh Youh Gomi Gomi kli bsr3a 
Me: yumma ma3rf a5taar 
Mother: tkbreen 3la kl shay ela eni a5tarlk akl!! 
Me: hehehe :$ 
I had my break fast! And I still one more hour and 30 minuets till my next class(: 

Turki came and sat next b,my table. 
Turki; keef kan el,class? Wrak 6l3ti bdri? Shftk tklmeen est7ait as2l 
Me: hu gali e6l3i! 
Turki; 6rda mn awl youm? WAAAAAK
Me: la la 6b3n-.-! 
I told him what happened 
Turki; 7'6666 mashallah 
Me: shayf keef (; 
Turki; mta your next class? 
Me: bagi sa3a w nu9 
That girl ely esmha Haifa b,my math class came 
Haifa: hi 
She was shy 
Both of us; heey 
Me: sh5bark? 
Haifa: b5eer w enti? 
Me: kwaisa 
Haifa: ahl e,Riyadh? 
Me: ee!  
Haifa: t3rfeen ..........? 
Ya bthara!!!!! 


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1 comment:

  1. YAAAYYYYYY! A7s mara bt6l3 a7la mn alfirst story! Amazing start<3

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