Wednesday, November 5, 2014

Cloud 9 08

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Cloud 9 chapter 8 

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I looked through the door's eye and it was Reem, hw sh9ayer? Wsh jaybha mn 9ba7 rbi 5eer? 

I opened the door. 
Me; halla Reem! Tf'9li 
Reem: halla! Zad Allah f'9lk 
She came in and sat 
Me: ma 3leek mn wjhi twni 9a7ya tra! 
Reem: la 3aadi 7ta Ana! 
Me; wsh tshrbeen? 
Reem; moya Allah y3afek! 
Me: bard wela 7ar? 
Reem: tslmeen mabi shay 
Me: agoul ghwa bskr wela bdoon 
Reem: bskr please 
Me: okay 
Reem: shaden 
Me: hala 
Reem: abi as2lk 
Me: Sammy 
Reem: wsh beenk w Bain turki? 
Me: wla shay? Friends? Or let me say he is the closest friend? 
Reem: hmm 
Me: leeh sh9ayer? 
Reem: ams b3d ma ra7o! G3dt asheel ashya2i w asm3 salman w turki yt'hawshon w turki ygool... 
She went silent 
Me: aywa ? 
Reem: gal 
Reem's point of view: 
Flashback to the park: 
Turki: esm3 ya salman ant '3ali w 3zeez Bs Allah y5leek la 3ad tklm shaden 
Salman: shd3wa turki! Ha4a w ent ma b3d e3trft lha "b7ubk" ajal lw gltlha wsh btswi? 
Turki; salman!!! 5laa9 3aad Ensa esalfah! Thani shay Ana jay a6lb mnk b,adab Allah y5leek rd b,adab
salman: Allah Allah shd3waa! 6ayb asfen m7nb mklmeenha w lsani mob 6ab 3la lsanha. Bs bgoulk shay, la t5le bnt t5rb 3lagtna ya turki mo bnt! 
Turki; salman!!! Ana ma glt shay bs la tklmha 3shan ma n5sr b3'9 
Salman: enshallah 
Turki: 7beebi wallah 
And they said goodbye and left. 

Back to Shaden's point of view: 
Reem: w bs! 
I was shocked.. My jaw dropped for a moment. 
Me: hu gal k4a 
Reem nodded 
No. Turki please don't make it harder. I beg. 
Me: shukran 
I took a sip from my coffee and stared blankly at the wall 
Reem: Ana asfa lw elklam '6aygk 
Me; la bl3x y36eek el3afyaa 
Reem: 3ad Ana b,mshi al7een w Asfa 3la jayti elmufaj2a hl,wgt w 97nk 7g el,cupcake 3,6awla! They were so yummy!  W thanks 3l,coffee it was needed 
Me: 7yaak ay wgt! Feeh el3fyaa 
Reem: Allah y3afek
And she left. 

I can't believe that Turki has feelings for me. He makes it harder and harder.. I need to make him hate me. It's the only way.. Or should I just tell him that I can't be "friends" with him. Hufffff. 

I took a shower to refresh me. I blow dried my hair. I wore my jeans and black I love Paris hoodie. Wore my walking sneakers. Glasses, Phone, Money, And went to Starbucks. 

I ordered a sandwich and sat to eat. I took my phone out and started checking whatsapp, twitter, Instagram. And I called my mother. 

Me; halla mama 
Mother; hala shaden 
Me; eshtgt lk 
Mother: Ana akthr 
Me: weenk? 
Mother: broo7 elm6ar. 
Me: yumma lazm? 
Mother: ee 
Me: yumma Allah y5leek 
Mother: 5la9 yumma la tnagsheeni Ana a54t 8rar w ma ra7 atraj3 3nh. 
Me: ely tshofenh. 
Mother: Allah y7f'6k 
Me: m3 eslammah 
And I hung up. 

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Two days passed nothing happened. I just tried to make turki hate me. But I couldn't. 

Today my mother will arrive. After I finished my classes I went directly to the airport. 

Car: 
Me: halla turki 
Turki; weenk? 
Me: ray7a elm6ar 
Turki: hw leeh? Sh9ayer? 3sa ma shrrr? 
Me: la bs mama jaya w ray7a asgblha
Turki; oh! 7amdellah 3la slamt'ha 
Me: Allah yslmk 
Turki; weenk b'6b6? 
Me: 30 minuets away from LAX 
Turki; ynf3 asolf m3k? 
Me: sure.. 
So what? 
Turki: elyoum t'hawsht m3 salman 
Me: leeh? 
Turki; gam ysbk.. 
Me; turki!!!!!!!! 
Turki: Sammy 
Me: leeeh k4a tswi? Mo gayltlk la tt'hawsh m3 3shani? 
Turki: shswiiii 7maar! Ana gaylh la y6reek 3la lsanh 
Me: Allah yhdeek. 
Fawaz I need you. Fawaz I need to talk to you. Please. I need your warm hugs. 
Turki: Ana asf 
Me: la tt2sf le.. T2sf lh hu. W e4a 3la8tna Ana wyak btswi mshakl... 
Turki; aywa? 
Me: I think we need to stop talking to each other.. 
Turki: as simple as this? 
Me: momken tfhm? 
Turki; wsh afhmmmmm? 
Me; turki ho 5wyk mn 4 snwat w Ana kam 9arli a3rfk? One week? Or one and a half? 
Turki: 6ayb lw ma tbeeni kan ma 5lteeni aklmk mn elbdaya w at3lg feek. 
Turki I was lost. I needed someone and you were the only one. 
Turki: bs 5la9 mo mshkla ya shaden! Allah ywfgk. 
Me: turki please esm3niiiiii 
Turki; asm3 wsho? 
Me: turki leeh ant t93b el,omor k4a? Turki you became one of the closest people to my heart. It isn't easy to leave you 
Turki; if it wasn't easy you wouldn't asked me to stop talking to you 
Me: he's your friend before me. You knew him before me. Please efhm. 
Turki; 5laa9 gltlk ma nklm b3'6 zay ma tbeen. Bye 
And he hung up.

I regret. Turki I'm sorry would you accept my apology? Come back. Shaden you wanted that. But I didn't want it at the same time. It's the right thing. But it shatters my heart. Shaden omk ya shaden. Omi.. Omi ahm mnh. 

I arrived to the airport and I waited for my mother. 
10 minuets 
20 minuets 
25 minuets 
Ufff 
35 minuets and she's finally out. 
I ran to her and hugged her so tight. I miss her so much. More than ever. 
Me: mamaaaaa eshtgtlkkkk 
Mother: Ana akthr yumma 
I backed off. Her eyes were full of tears 
Me: momken afhm leeh tbkeen? 
Mother: mshtagtlk
Me: Ana gdamk 6ayb:( 
Mother: 7amdellah grtt 3aini 
I took her bags and I asked for a car. 
Me: mama akeed jo3ana a3rfk ma t7been akl e6yara. Al7een elbait w asweelk a7la akla b,dniya 
Mother: ya 7'6iiii 
I hugged her a side hug. 

We hopped in the car. 

Mother: yumma shloun 3aysha bhl,bard 
Me; shfti yumma gltlk brd 3laik bs ma tsm3eeni 
Mother: la t5afeek jayba lbs 
Me: Allah ys'hl and I let a sigh out. 
Mother: wsh swaiti elyoum 
Me: r7t eljam3a 
Mother: bs? 
Me: ee 
Mother: Allah ywfgk w ys'hl w yft7 3leek w yktblk ely feeh el5eer 
Wsh a7sn mn k4a:')? D3wa mn a6yb glb b,hdniya:") 
Me: ameen 
And I laid my head on her thigh 
Mother: shfeek? 
Me; la bs eshtgt lk 
And she started to play with my hair. Flashbacks haunt me. 

flashback: 
Fawaz: esm3i shaden lazm nroo7 California b3d b3'9 
Me: tst'hbl???? 6b3nn lw r7t m3k aroo7 m3 meen? Wallah ma 7alga a7d yws3 9dri krhtk 
Fawaz: aywa!! 
Mother: 3la Asas btroo7on? 
Fawaz: 6b3n 5ala bnroo7 
Aunt: mafeeh ro7a ela rjli 3la rjlkom 
Me: leeh tshofona bzran? 
Aunt: l2nkom bzran w bz3 b3d 
Fawaz: a777! 6oul w 3r'9 bnhaya baz3? Yumma ahnteeni 9ra7a 
Aunt: kl bs kl bla ha4ra zayda 
Me: esm3 bs Ana abi LA 
Fawaz: 5eer la Ana abi Irvine 
Me: ya sheeee5!!!!! Must7eel kreeha ma7bha 
Fawaz: roo7i l7alk LA 
Me: broo7 l7aali azyn fakka mnk 
Fawaz: mo tw tgoulen m7d yws3 9dri kthrk? Wsh h,nfa8? 
Me: as7b klaaami 
Fawaz: shaden 
Me: 5eer?-.-
Fawaz: kli tbn 
Me: ma aklk 7boob 
Fawaz: broo7 London w anti enthbri hena 
Me: Allah bage lk 6 sh'hoor 
Fawaz: broo7 w anti bt5eesen b,Riyadh 
Me: kl zg 
Fawaz: 3n el'3l6 
Me: ya sheee5 engl3 bs 5lni akml akli 
Mother: 7rb feeran 4e mta bt5l9 
Fawaz: hy ely bdt 
Me: shffffffffff!!!!! M7d badi '3eerk 
Fawaz; chub 
Me; ezibdah byeee 
Fawaz: ween ray7a 
Me: bait 9a7bti 
Fawaz: meen bywdeek 
Me: eswag meen b3d 
Fawaz: bjy m3k e9bri abeeh ynzlni bmkan 
Me: tra Ana awl 
Fawaz: Ana agrb 
Me: Mali d5l!!!!!! 5lga mt25ra 
Fawaz: meen 9a7btk 4e? 
Me: Dina 
Fawaz: esorya 4eek? 
Me:  mo sorya bs bai'9a w jdt'ha hy soriya 
Fawaz: wallah shklha sory b7t 
Aunt: Fawaz!!!!!!!!! Ant wsh 3rfk b,ashkal 97bat shaden? 
Fawaz: ahhhh! Marh shaden wrtni 9wrhom 
Mother: SHADEN 
Me: yumma wallah laaa k4aab! Ho ely jani bl,mamlka w shafhom! W 7ta fshlni gdamhom etbn 
Fawaz: ya k4aba 
Me: e7lf eni k4aba ashoof!!!!!!!
Fawaz: ahhh 
Aunt: a5r marh a5lek troo7 mkan feeh shaden-.- 
Fawaz: ya zg ya shaden Ana awreek 
Me: '6hr el78!!! 
Aunt: shaden ro7i. W 5le eswag yrj3 lh ma tro7on m3 b3'9 
Fawaz: laaaa yummaaaaa wallah y3lg b,za7ma ma 3ad y6l3 
aunt: tstahl ant ely jbt'ha lnfskk 
Me; Byeeee 
End of flashback 

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....: shaden .......

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1 comment:

  1. 7raaaammm shadennnn 9'ygt 9drre b3den leeeh 4a alzg turki 3la 6ol gal bye w bkefk 5eeeer enshala! THANKYOU SO MUCH FOR THE AMAZING CHAPTER.

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